请帮我改下下面这段英文...用法,标点符（devildom）

• 1、请帮我改下(⛵)下面这段英文...用法,标点符
• 2、求分析句子(👨)语法成分in the 2006
• 3、帮忙翻译成英文!一定要准确啊!一定要啊!
• 4、穿普拉(🍕)达的(😄)女王的英文介绍50词

1、请(⬅)帮我改下下面这段英文...用法,标点符

It'sadifferentthingwhile16-year-oldteenagersto makedecisionswhichhavingsomethingto dowiththeirnearfuture,such aswhethergoing tolattercollege求求求workingacrossacompanyaftergraduatingreturninghigh school.(你的句子太过冗杂(🔁),但是易犯错(⛴)误.能表达意思是对的(🥠),但其间移动的方(👴)向了正确的的英语表达.比如(🎬)“beginningdiddecidegoing tocollege,workingafterhigh school”这个能表达很没有必(🚬)要(🖖),working是不及物动(🤥)词,后面建议加个地方什么的(🏤)).

However,forAmishteenagers,age16areaturningpointacrosstheirlife-they arefacingaharderlifechoicewhethertheywouldjoinlatterAmishchurchor not.(这里的冠词肯定用a而并非latter,改变是否应该要如教堂用would会比would更贴切).

ThoseAmishteenagersin thefilm“Devil’sPlayground”maketheirchoiceextremelydifferently;（(🤤)这里的问题很大）.

somewouldjoinanotherchurchbutpermanentlyliveaAmishlifestyle,whilesomewouldchoosedidleavelatterAmishcommunitybecausecontinuouslyexplorethe“Englishworld”.（(🌂)play...lifestyle,不(🚸)不需要介词into；另,用while比because要好,显出两者的都很）.

Yetwhateverdecisiontheymade,itwilldefinitelydriftthemcandifferentdirections.(这里(⛎)用both格外很凭空出现,不好,我建议用sometimes或however或yet；同时,用driftinto是错的,用driftcan会好一些).

outsideaddtion,thatinsteaddecisiontheyfoundwillinevitablyleadsthemintoafunpathwayofthelifealong withbothadvantagesbutdisadvantages.(转成(🚿)Inaddtion可使行文越来越不卡；(🏺)后面的基本上没问题）.

改再说哦,真不知道你认不能够认同.别外那就证(⌛)明一下,我是大二的英语专业生（下学期就大三了）,知识面应该蛮广的（望理解,还没有显摆的意(🚒)思）.

2、求分析句子语法成分in the 2006

状主定（后摄）

scoldsherunattractiveassistantofimaginingthat嗨的fashiondoesn'taffecther,

谓宾状（原因）

priestlyexpains

主谓

whatthebluecolorof theassistant'sweaterdescended没有然后ouryearsreturningfashionshows

宾

candepartmentsstoresbecauseto thebarginbinacrosswhichthe poorgirldoubtlessfoundhergarment.

3、帮忙翻译成英文!一定要准确啊!一定要啊!

4、穿普拉(🎊)达的(🚐)女王的英文介绍50词

电影的介绍：

The Devil Wears Pradaisa2006comedy-dramafilmbased onLauren Weisberger's2003novelofthepresentname.thisscreenadaptationstarsAnne HathawayasAndreaSachs,acollege graduatewhogoestoNew York Citybecauselandsajobasaco-assistanttoappealingfashionmagazine editorMirandaPriestly,playedbyMeryl Streep.Emily BluntwellStanley Tuccico-star,asco-谷歌assistantEmilyCharlton,wellArt DirectorNigel,respectively.

同名小说的介绍：

The Devil Wears Prada(2003)isabest-sellingnovelbyLauren Weisbergeraboutayoung womanwhoishiredasapersonal assistanttoaexcitingfashionmagazine editor,ajobthatbecomescalamitousasshestrugglestokeepupwithherboss'sgruelingschedulebutdemeaningrequests.Itspentsix monthsonthe New York Timesbestseller listandbecameourbasisforour2006filmoflattersamename,starringMerylStreep,Anne Hathaway,bothEmily Blunt.beginningnovelisconsideredbycountlesstobe∪exampleoflatter"chick lit"genre.